Due Now: 3 original metaphors, similes, and personifications
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- OCPoWriMo
- Onomatopoeia, Alliteration, Consonance
- Sentence Prescriptions
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i read the poem "Desperation, by Alexander Atwood" i liked it becouse in the first three sentences there was a constant repetition of the "The need,
ReplyDeleteThe want.
The desire," says Alexander then after a little while he does the same thing but in a diffrent fashon. "The fear of indifference.
The fear of rejection.
The want to" i think this is a very good litterary device. also he makes it kinda rough at the begening to show his frustaration in freedom this poem is something everyone can realate to - Maksim Glizin
They say forever won't last...
ReplyDeletetime will break and it just won't pass
on into eternity. I want this love to be true.
To exist as the world does, but I'm
only a dreamer. I need to be free from the
magical passion that has been stuck inside me.
Burned to an abnormal tint of yellow reflects the
lust I have for you. For us.
Trust me, you say over and over again.
If only this love was as bright as the stars
after a thunder storm, then maybe
just possibly I'd be able to wipe away
these tears of manic hysteria. The sweet waves
of genuine anxiety that caress me when I feel
your kiss on my cheek.
You're saying goodbye again. Moving on with
the wind to find your next target. I still don't see
how you could teach me to release the lock
I have on my soul...the lock I needed to protect
myself from loving you so much.
They say forever won't last...
simply because no one tried to prove them wrong.
By
Amber Galbraith
i enjoy this poem. this poem is pretty much saying that love wont last forever and that love only happens in fairy tale. the sad thing about it is that its true. love only happens in a fairy tale. we grow up to believe that fairy tales are true and that we will find out our true love. that all a big bowl of baloney.